Antigone Cadmus

City of Dis. (Get out of my head, Dante!)

When I write, I like to pretend my reader has no idea what I'm talking about. When I character bleeds, I think, How would I describe blood to someone who ...

Lucifer.

9/10. Cute. :)

Eight level of Hell. It's what came to mind... I read to much Dante. :)

Pisces.

Banned for not being patriotic for Finnish football.

I posted this on the essay as well so you can go back to my critique while editing. ^_^ :shock: That's how you were told to write it? Wow... Welllll, ...

Obviously she purposfully makes her voice sound like that. Woman always exaggerate their voices to play young male characters. Tommy from rugrats and Bart from Simpson's are both women. . ...

'Tis finished!

Eep... I always get nervous when reviewing your stuff... But, here as requested! My reason to compare these sources is to see how the same events differ when written in ...

*twiddles thumbs* Anyone?

Yay! Grammar check! *dances like a toddler* Anyway... The bushes and gnarled trees basked in the sunlight, smiling and the warm fuzzy glow. -- I think "and" should be changed ...

Hey, Night! Chapter four While I waited for Odette to come home, I busied myself by alternating reading my book and cleaning my room. Very awkwardly worded. How about: "While ...

Hey, JujuMayuDreamer14! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ Fight every with every ounce of your strength. This makes no sense. Is it supposed to be a question: ...